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This VN was a ton of fun to read!  I for one would love to get kabedon'd by a mysterious beauty inside of a haunted eldritch monster building, especially if she were a confident charmer like Eve, heheheh~

Eve's quips and banter to make the Entity jealous tickled me, but I got a real hoot out of the scenes where Eve and Anna would end up in each others' space for one reason or another—and then the spooky dark ambient exploration music would instantly get swapped out for a sexy jazz tune while they flirted, ahahaha~

I'm sure that Anna will find happiness in her new Extremely Normal relationship, and that she won't have to spare a single moment's thought about... wait, what was that other girl's name again?  I can't seem to remember it now... but oh well, it doesn't matter anyway~

But yes, I very much enjoyed your work, and I hope to see more from you in the future!

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Thank you so much for your comment!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had lots of fun writing it too ^^

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i liked this! i wasn't sure where it was going at first, but i got the true end, and really enjoyed it haha!! good for anna.

the ambient music was all nice, and i really enjoyed the rough edges of the artwork. there were some comic-style touches too, like the patterned dots on laura's dress shading, that were really neat! i also thought the description of the monster was interesting, how it changes focus depending on where you look.

eve blowing the kiss to the window lol. she's so mean (and cool). i really laughed at the line where the monster describes the length of time of their relationship, and anna just goes... oh. that's a lot longer than any of mine have lasted... poor anna...!!! it was really charming, thanks for sharing.

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Thank you so much for your kind comment! I'm glad you liked it :)